Monday, October 27, 2008

Haraiku

As inspired by Joaqui Miguel and Tristan's haikuhan...

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PAGKIKITA

Nagkatinginan
Saka nagkangitian
Nagkagustuhan.

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PAGTATAGPO

Tayo'y nagsayaw
At ako ay niyakap
Sabay hinagkan.

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PAGNINIIG

Bawal na prutas
Tinikman ko’t nilasap
Tamis ng katas.

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PAGHIHIWALAY

Pusong ulila
Ipinagkatiwala
Ba't pinaluha.

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12 comments:

  1. Tristan TanOctober 27, 2008 at 1:59 PM

    Ay may comment na ehem?!? ;)

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  2. ArisOctober 27, 2008 at 2:20 PM

    @tristan: nasamid lang! :)

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  3. A.DimaanoOctober 27, 2008 at 4:54 PM

    Nakigaya ako sa inyo. LOL! =)

    Bitin ako sa akin. Parang gusto ko dagdagan. =)

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  4. ArisOctober 27, 2008 at 6:36 PM

    @mr. scheez: ang saya saya naman ng haikuhan! more, mr. scheez! :)

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  5. A.DimaanoOctober 27, 2008 at 6:51 PM

    Naku, alam mo bang indi pasado sa friend ko na poet yung ginawa ko. Palanca winner pa naman yun. Nakakahiya ako. Huhuhu =(

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  6. ArisOctober 27, 2008 at 6:59 PM

    @mr. scheez: huy, hindi naman. ang mahalaga, maipahayag ang sarili, di ba? basta galing sa puso, maganda! :)

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  7. Looking For The SourceOctober 27, 2008 at 8:35 PM

    galing!

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  8. ArisOctober 27, 2008 at 8:45 PM

    @source: sali ka rin! :)

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  9. Looking For The SourceOctober 27, 2008 at 10:21 PM

    naku wala akong galing sa mga ganyan...

    hanggang basa lang ako. heheh

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  10. JoaquiOctober 28, 2008 at 12:49 AM

    Four haikus? How can I beat that? lol

    Great job! :)

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  11. ArisOctober 28, 2008 at 7:29 AM

    @joaqui: your haiku inspired me! :)

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  12. ArisOctober 28, 2008 at 7:31 AM

    @source: ikaw pa. magaling ka kaya! :)

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